Critique of Mary I.'s blog "Going Hungry: Life of the Homeless" November 24, 2011

Mary's blog is passionate and honest about the ideas and facts she is presenting. As oppose to the use of professional grammar to express an opinion, she delivers her own realistic views of the subject of poverty without the use of sugar coating. Through this, she creates an appreciation for the issue of poverty and retains the interest of the reader through the curiosity and desire to further explore her views in the multiple areas of hunger and homelessness. However, in some areas the enthusiasm is lost because it seems as if her ideas are rushed and overzealous. For example, in the 'The many definitions of poverty: According to Me' section loses its passion through brief definitions with an lack of explanation and opinion. Although I agree with her multiple definitions, I find myself left with a need for a reason for such ideas. Yet, her overall blog demonstrates a deep sense of knowledge and passion in the subject of poverty and I feel she did a great job.