Critique of Mehjabeen P.'s blog "Only if poverty was an issue of the past…" November 25, 2011

Mehjabeen’s blog is well laid out with a great introduction to the beginning of her blog. She introduces herself and presents a few personal facts about her place of employment along with her choice of major and why, then proceeds to briefly describe the overall subject of her blog. The ideas and facts she offers the audience on the subject of poverty is well written, however, lacks a form of complexity and passion. Her expressions of opinion is somewhat delicate, however, she delivers personal and genuine views of the issue of poverty through her own words, presenting a logic of honesty and truth. Her blog presents a great sense of knowledge in the subject of poverty and maintains the reader’s attention through her sincere awareness of the fact that poverty is indeed a serious and unrelenting presence throughout society. She did a very good job!